Monday, January 4, 2010

Not Just a Mention, an Actual Post... Shooting Stars Contest is Live!

CLANG CLANG BOOM! CLANG CLANG BOOM! That's the sound of the one-woman-band outfit I'm wearing, complete with cymbals on the knees and honkey-horns under my flip-flops. My toenails have sparkly shooting stars on them and everything!

Hopefully you got the hint, because you're a follower on the Shooting Stars blog, of course. You're not? Hop on over! Or read this first and I bet you will be by the time you're done :)

*Cue fanfare*

a blog by two incredible and 
absolutely lovely sisters
named Bethany Wiggins
and Suzette Saxton
who are both awesome 
(I overuse awesome but in this case 
it is extreeeeeemely warranted),
is having
Suzette and Bethany's 
Wicked-Awesome-Prizes Contest!!!!!!!
(I also abuse exclamation points. Again,
warranted in their awesome case.)

Prizes include: 
2 query critiques, 
2 first-five critiques, 
and an inscribed/autographed The Dark Divine (as in, personalized just for you-- squee!!)

No, there are no bonus points for being enthusiastic, but I have a special place in my heart for these two. They followed my blog early-on, back in the days when I was surprised to see a comment at all. I've seen Suzette's posts on Querytracker since before I ever dreamed of starting a blog of my own. I watched first Bethany and then Suzette accept offers of representation from amazing agents, and I can't wait to see the exciting things waiting for them on the horizon. Actually, I can't wait to see posts about their first sales, and release dates, and doing their Book Talks... does my genuine affection show? These gals are top-notch and I'm not afraid to let it show. Definitely check out their blog, you'll adore them. Now I'm going to clang off to find loads of ways to rack up the entry points! Here's the link again, good luck everyone!

A Quick and Dirty New Year's Post

This morning is first-day-of-school craziness so this post will be a shorty but hopefully still a goody. 
  • I had so much fun reading everyone's almost-kisses for the No Kiss Blogfest... well, almost everyone's... I still haven't gotten through them all! I will though, slowly but surely, because all this love and and longing is too awesome to miss.
  • Have you guys seen the contest on KidLit? Extremely great opportunity if you have a completed ms ready to query. Go on, check it out!
  • Thanks to everyone who participated in my Pride and Prejudice, with or without Zombies poll. 14 total votes, with readers who enjoyed BOTH books taking the lead. I'm happy to see that no one hated both of the books, especially since Austen is one of my all-time favorite authors ever in the history of the world. Not that I'm biased.
  • Lastly, how's everyone's writing going? I've managed to write or at least edit every day this year so far *grin* Hopefully I'll manage to keep it that way!
Have a great start to the New Year everyone! 

Saturday, January 2, 2010

A Steamy New Year's Kiss... Almost

Here is my almost-kiss for Frankie Diane's No Kiss Blogfest. It's from an old novel I never finished called Cast Away, a regency-era stranded-on-a-desert-island kind of thing. Marisa is seventeen, Nathan is twenty, and they're freshly shipwrecked in the Caribbean after her first "season" in London.

**Edited to add: Cast Away would have been my second novel had I finished it (my first was the 120K medieval romance I keep mentioning, never to see the light of day). I only got about a hundred pages into Cast Away because I kept going back and forth with a new YA story idea I wanted to write (Sinister, for those who keep tabs on this. I should really put it in my sidebar). So I decided to focus on the YA novel and see what happened, and I've written YA ever since. 
But anyway, I like the almost-kiss in chapter one, so here it is!

Nathan stopped rowing and his turquoise eyes grew round. Gabriella found it difficult to breathe when he looked at her that way, a fact that frustrated her further. “In any case,” she said, struggling to keep a civil tone, “I wanted to thank you. After all, if it hadn’t been for you--”
“We’ve struck,” he said, his voice hushed... almost disbelieving.
“Oh, I see,” she mumbled, then realized what he’d said. “You mean we’ve struck land?”
Nathan tugged on his oars to demonstrate. Gabriella peered over the boat’s edge with a pounding heart. They'd been rowing toward that infernal island for so long she almost didn't believe they'd ever arrive.
Instantly her mind dropped all thoughts save one: land! A bubble of laughter rose in her chest and she clapped her hands over mouth. Nathan clamored out of the boat, not bothering to suppress his own laughter. “Come on! It's shallow enough.”
She splashed out after him, doing her best to help pulled the boat along the gentle low tide. Land, land! She hardly dared believe the soft rush of sand along her feet as they made their way toward the shoreline. 
Despite the low tide, the pull of the ocean rushed their boat forward, propelling it to the white strip of beach ahead. Gabriella's skirts swirled around her as she struggled to catch her breath, nearly falling over in the waves. “We’re saved,” she panted, realizing she'd been muttering the phrase like a mantra.
“And to think,” he said, holding her arm as she steadied herself against him. “You were so certain we'd perish at sea. Are you disappointed? You so detest being proved wrong.” 
She laughed, too giddy to stop herself. “I am still certain we shall perish, though now it will be on this savage island.” A wave pushed past them, swelling to Nathan’s thighs and Gabriella's waist. His smile faded, his breath coming in shallow pants of leftover exertion. Gabriella swallowed the last of her laughter.  Shimmering droplets fell from his hair, and those bright blue-green eyes of his churned like the sea around them. 
Her gaze dropped to his chest and the wet linen shirt that clung to each hard, muscular ridge. The warm current urged them together. Gabriella exhaled as their bodies made contact. She tasted the salt water on her lips, felt his hand tighten on her waist... when had it gotten to her waist?
No. No. This was Nathan. “The tide is coming in,” she said in a clipped voice.  “We had best get back to shore.”
He was so close, still touching her... holding her. She waited, though it was difficult to meet his eyes with him so intensely close. “This is a liberty,” whispered harshly.
“Perhaps I'm the sort that takes liberties.”
“Well I am not the sort that gives them,” she retorted automatically. 
He raised a brow and she blinked past a moment's shame. Too late she recalled what he'd seen between her and that idiot in London. Her blush set her skin to scalding. Another wave rolled by, propelling their boat to the beach and Gabriella into his solid frame again. She refused to rest allow her gaze to linger on the rise and fall of his chest... his smoldering eyes-- they held no appeal for her. Even the rows of golden stubble covering his jaw didn't stir a ripple of hot longing. She refused to wonder what that unshaven face might feel like pressed against her hand, those lips against her own.
He cupped her chin and she could only blink up at him. His other hand, still on her waist and hidden below the water’s surface, made its way to the small of her back, urging her closer. 
“Nathan.” The word came from deep in her throat, embarrassing in it's intimacy, startling her back to her senses. He brought his lips so close she could feel his warm breath as she turned her face away. She couldn’t keep her eyes open against the pleasure of his rough, bristly cheek against her skin. She could barely trust herself not to grab his jaw and kiss him like she'd wanted to do since before she could remember. “Let go of me,” she said, sounding harsh in her effort to keep control. “Let go.”
Thanks for reading, I can't wait to read all of yours! 

Thursday, December 31, 2009

9 Favority-Favorite Things of '09 Challenge

Happy New Year's Eve! Today I'm giving myself an overdue Christmas present... three of them actually. Barnes and Nobles online has Catching Fire by Suzanne Collins on sale (ten bucks hardcover! Note: I am biased toward Peeta. Choose him, Katniss! Choose him!!), and of course I need to grab the free shipping by spending $25... it would be a waste of money not to, or so I tell myself, so I'm also picking up City of Bones by Cassandra Clare and Graceling by Kristin Cashore. So happy!

And the beautiful Karen at Scobberlotcher gave me an award! The Kreativ Blogger, thank you so much! I've received this one before, and here is the link to my oh-so-revealing answers, but I wanted to say thanks. Awards always make me smile.

In other shiny, happy news, there are book giveaways all over the place. Check out I'm Always Write for a chance to win Catching Fire (what? You haven't read Hunger Games???? Go! Read!!); Agent Rachelle Gardner has a poetry contest of sorts to win your choice out of ten books she's offering; and Book Dreaming is celebrating 100 Followers with a mega giveaway, with two winners each getting six books! I plan on having another giveaway to thank my 100 Followers too... honest, really-truly I am... I'm just procrastinating until I get over the holidays.

What other goody-goodness is out there? Lots of New Year's resolutions about to be made, from what I see on the blogs I follow. I don't usually officially make any resolutions, however this year I am resolved to not just finish my wip, but to edit, revise, polish, and repeat, and make this story heart-wrenching-incredible before the end of 2010.

To round out the New Year, I thought it'd be fun to do my 9 Favority-Favorites of 2009. Then someday I can be like, "Aww, I can't believe I forgot about all those favorites!" And, "Wow, I used to say awesome a lot." Want to play? Here's the challenge:
  • Choose one out of the nine topics below (or more than one, if you're crazy like me) and post up to nine of your faves of that topic in the comments.
Here are my
9 Favority-Favorites of '09
I'm choosing up to 9 answers for each category.
Don't judge! I know I'm crazy!

1. Books: (I read these in 2009 and loved them, I'm not saying they were actually published in 2009): The Hunger Games, A Great and Terrible Beauty, Fragile Eternity, The Boleyn Inheritance, City of Jade, Princess Academy, Sirena, Valiant, The Poisonwood Bible

2. Authors: Meg Cabot, Sarah Desson, Shannon Hale, Isabelle Allende, Libba Bray, Clare B. Dunkle, Dennis McKiernan, Ally Carter, Laura Kinsale (Some of these are all-time faves, but I can't help it!)

3. Movies: Funny People, The Frog Princess, New Moon, The Time Traveler's Wife, The Proposal, 17 Again... can't think of any more!

4. Actors/Actresses: Hmm, I like Amy Adams, Eric Bana, and-- and-- and-- I'm bad with names! I hope all my answers don't suck :)

5. TV Shows: The Office, Survivor, 30 Rock, Community, and... oh man, this is hard to think up on the spot, but my DVR will tell you.

6. Songs: Fireflies, Let it Rock, Replay, anything by the bands in #7, I don't know! This seemed easier when I was coming up with the categories.

7. Band/Singer: The Fray, Linkin' Park, Greenday, Black-Eyed Peas, We The Kings, Hey Monday, Jordin Sparks, um-- um-- um-- there are more, I just need to get in the car and turn on the radio!

8. Foods/Restaurants: Hey, I don't like cooking but I love food! Give me sushi from Wasabi, ultra cheesy guacamole-smothered nachos from Camacho's, Zebra popcorn from Popcornopolis (I'll eat it until I make myself sick, seriously mouth-watering), those little cheese-filled curled things from Buca di Bepo... basically, take me to City Walk and let me take my pick, mmmmm!

9. Your Choice Favorites: Friends and family are my favority-favorite, but I also love writing of course, and my DVR, my laptop, my crit buddies, people who don't give my son Transformers, my wip, agents who read slush and reply, and my bloggity blog buddies! You guys are so awesome (whew, I managed to use 'awesome' only once today!).

If any of those categories make you think of your own favorites from the past year, comment away :) And happy New Year's everyone!!

*Also, see you on Saturday for the almost kiss No Kissing Blogfest (Frankie Diane's idea), and enjoy the last of 2009!

Monday, December 28, 2009

Transform Your Writing and Other Cheesy Transformers References

Is it New Year's Resolution time already? I'm putting mine off. New Year's is still three days away, so I may as well live it up! And WOOHOO on my one hundred Followers!! Thank you guys! I need to come up with a brilliant way to celebrate... maybe another book giveaway?


The holidays have been crazy-busy for me, as I'm sure with everyone else. I haven't been able to get in any writing time (sob!), but today I'm definitely going to. I need a break, and writing is my lovvvve

Before I can write though, I have to distract my five-year-old and discreetly hide all his new Transformers. He received a bunch of the hateful things from well-meaning friends and family, (he told everyone that they're his favorite and he doesn't have ANY... well, there's a reason he doesn't have any. I hate them). It gets worse, though. There are different levels of Transformer torture, and my son received all of the most complicated, intricately crafted Transformers on the market today. The helicopter blades and missiles are impossible to attach, arms and legs keep popping off at the slightest pressure; he can't even transform the things, much less fix their broken limbs-- but he thinks I can do it! Rrrright. I'm not awesome at fixing things, toy or otherwise. I keep telling him to wait for Daddy to come home (as I smother an evil grin) but he wants to play nowwwwww- and why can't I just fix it- and he can't do it- and whine-whine-whine. Patience? Not my virtue. But I can fake it, and I do subscribe to mommy-guilt so FINE, I'll try. Let's see how fast I can transform these toys into piles of crushed plastic bits.

Now, cue the cheesy Transformers references... Even cheesier than this post title? Yes! Because good writing is (dramatic pause) more than meets the eye. Well, good writing is subjective, and books don't transform into battling robots warring between good and evil to decide the fate of the galaxy (yet... who knows what the next generation of e-readers will bring?). But good writing is more than whatever the blurb on the back of the book says (and more than the paragraph summary in a query). It has layers... it makes you think... and the best books, I believe, are the ones with characters that stay with you long after reading the last page. 

So how, as aspiring authors, do we make that happen? 

I ponder this as I read through my wip and fend off my son's continued requests to turn his Transformer into a helicopter and back again. Once I reach the end of my wip, will I have done it justice? There's nothing wrong with writing another YA romance, but I feel like there's something more to this story. And that's where it all comes back to revisions. Once I have the whole story written, I can hopefully turn this book into more than what it seems like on the surface. I can give it layers, make it one of those great stories that are even better on a reread...or at least, I can try as hard as I can to make it that kind of book. 


I have three completed novels. I've proven to myself that I can finish a novel. With THIS story, I want to do more. I want to make it great. I want it to be so great... so perfect... so rock-hard awesome that even a person who reads and edits books for a living-- a person who sees a hundred new story ideas a week-- even THAT person won't want to put it down. This is the book. I'm not querying this one too soon, or even rushing through scenes if I get stuck (if I must, I'll put brackets and [finish this later!]. I don't have to prove to myself that I can finish a book. Not anymore. I have to prove to myself that I can write a publishable book, one that resonates, that oozes writerly goodness (this is the GOAL!). I will chisel away at this story and take my time doing it. I will transform it from the idea it started out as, into a book that's ready to war against the forces of evil in an epic battle to decide the fate of the galaxy. Or a YA romance. Whatever. The point is, it'll be good or it won't be queried. Period.

Where are you in your writing transformation? Is good writing more than meets the eye? Does it even have to be?

On another note, if you've read Pride and Prejudice and Zombies, there are three days left on the poll to your left. So far it looks like the purists are in the lead (but barely); thanks for voting!